🎬 Page 3 - Work in progress

The layout:

The thumbnail:

Here is the pencil:

Please comment.

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This looks good! :grinning:

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An attempt with round bubbles instead of rectangular ones:

What do you think?

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I like it. I always favor the round bubbles in comic books. Makes it feel more natural.

Thanks @soare. I got this same feedback multiple times from the English-speaking audience (in French comics, both formats are common). I think we’ll switch to round.

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